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DECLINED DexToxz Guard application

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IGN:DexToxz
Age:11
Timezone:UTC+2
Rank:Fire
Have you ever guarded before on another server? What server?:No I never was a guard.
Have you ever been banned before? Why?I dont get banned.
Previous names on the server"My One and only Name is DexToxz.
Have you read the Skyprison laws:Yes i do.
Why should we pick you as a guard?:I think you should pick me as guard because I'm Good at pvp. I know guard isn't all PvP but when you are good at PvP, you can have a good advantage. I Want Help sp With be Guard i readed the laws alot of times :p I wanna try be Guard For make the pvpzone Better. and Play with Another Guards on the server
Are you a team player?I am a team player, as I prefer to work with a team anyway. I am good at communicating, and making plans to ensure we get the correct result. I also ensure that everyone in the team is treated the same, and at a good and reasonable standard. However, I am also good at working alone.
What would you do if you saw another guard abusing their powers?Well I dont Saw Player's I readed Tips anyways I would ensure that what they're doing is wrong, and I will ensure that I tell a high member of staff (Sr-Guard/Mod) And I wanna Have the sr-guard if I will can Make that apply.
Additional info[optional]:Thank you for reading my application. I hope I can be helpful in the guard team in the future.
;) :thumb:
Posted Oct 30, 16 · OP · Last edited Oct 30, 16
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It's not good to apply right after you got denied. Your age is changing a lot is that just me, or what? You need way way way way WAY more info on "Why should we pick you as a guard?" Being Guard is not just about being good at PvP it's about respecting the rules as well.

You need info on What would you do if you saw another guard abusing their powers?" Some of it doesn't make sense "Well I dont Saw Player's I readed Tips anyways," "And I wanna Have the sr-guard if I will can Make that apply." Also add way more info on "Are you a team player?" because you just said I am good at working with others, you need to say how you can do that or why you would do that, and how you are good around others.

Go over your grammatical mistakes I understand if you are foreign, you may have trouble but ask your parents or a friend to help. I suggest you don't talk about your application in game, because this can defiantly lower your chances.

I suggest you read the TIPS because you're missing something important also read the RULES as well because you are also missing something important there also.

Best of luck on your application, feel free to mail me in game if you have any concerns.
Posted Oct 31, 16 · Last edited Nov 1, 16
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Well , I am sorry but I have quite a lot to say ;p First off , fix some phrases like "Well I don't Saw Player's" It doesn't really make sense , also you have to watch out where to put in the capital letters , the "Saw" and the "Players" do not need capital letters. Tip: (You only need capital letters at the start of a sentence/after a dot (.) and also for names and stuff like that). You need to have more info on "Why should we pick you as a guard" and possibly some more on "Are you a team player?" You should read the tips again because something is missing in your application that shows that you didn't read them or that you didn't read them carefully.. Okay , I think that's all for now :p

Besides the stuff I said about your application up there , I wish you good luck! ;)
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Posted Nov 1, 16 · Last edited Nov 5, 16
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You know u need a little more info. Anyway good luck ;)
Posted Nov 5, 16
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Well, First you need a lot more info. Second doesn't seem like your really all that mature but maybe I misjudged. Third a lot of bad grammar
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Posted Nov 5, 16
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Your doing really well Dexxy. You just need more info. <3
Posted Nov 5, 16
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